WRITERS DIGEST REVIEW


Title: THE PRESIDENT’S ULTIMATUM

Author: John Cavi

Judge Number: 15

 

You do marvelous job combing contemporary political intrigue with a fascinating plot. I was riveted throughout not only because of the unputdownable story, but also because of the great sense of reality it has. The character of Ari is a true gift. Your decision to have him torn between Israeli and Palestinian factions is truly inspired. The narrative hop-scotches around the globe and over a sizable timeframe, yet you are able to keep everything tied tightly together. Actually, this structure which could have been a challenge to the readers’ attention, functions as a tool that keeps the story varied. I completely enjoyed the tale from the beginning to the end and look forward to more from you.

            GRAMMER 5

            PLOT 5

            CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT 5

            STRUCTURE & ORGANIOZATION 4

            PRODUCTION QUALITY & COVER DESIGN 4

 

20th Annual Writer’s Digest Self-Published Book Awards